Class Minutes
Week 1
Week 2 Class Minutes for ENGLISH 303 Prepared by Rich Brewer Thursday January 18th, 2001 In Absentia: Tiffany Eason, Marcus Rostlund Homework for Tuesday January 23rd, 2001: Read Chapter 4 in The Craft of Clarity and do the exercises on page 54. The exercises should be typed in either a Microsoft Word or Rich Text (RT) format and saved to a disk. Bring the disk to class. We will be meeting in the computer lab in room 202. Dr. Adams went over wordiness, redundancy, vagueness, prepositional phrases, abstract or long words, relative clauses, dangling modifiers, mixed metaphors and subservient or ‘Weasel’ words. Notes from class:
Dr. Adams instructed the class to bring all homework (unless otherwise notified) in on disk.
Week 3 Taken by Jen Caruso January 25, 2001 Class Absences: Chad Messer and Tiffany Eason Dr. Adams handed out a worksheet and explained the business style of a letterhead should look like this example given in class: (the sender’s address, date, the receivers address and the heading) P.O. Box 3171
Ms. Mary Adams
Dear Ms. Adams: Next Dr. Adams talked about Active and Passive voice in Chapter 4 of The Craft of Clarity; she also picked examples and made the corrections for review. The class broke into groups and worked on the handout given at the beginning of class, to fix the “be” verbs and rewrite. An example was given on the board to illustrate how to avoid “be” verbs in our writing. Homework for Tuesday 1/30:
Week 4 Submitted by Scarlett Clark January 30, 2001 In absenta: Eason, Landingham, Messer,
and Reeves were not present.
Procedures for placing class assignments
in the class drop folder: Dr. Adams demonstrated to the class
how to turn in our assignments electronically. Instructions are the
following:
Dr. Adams requests that the homework be completed by Thursday (February 1, 2001). Taken by Jennifer S. Conklin Dr. Adams did not take roll. Dr. Adams began class with a guest speaker: Rick Boyer who discussed conflict and other aspects of fiction writing. Boyer defined the following:
He also discussed and used Shakespeare to describe how fiction should be written with both style and content. Boyer also said that “great stories use questions”. Dr. Adams resumed class by giving out a hand-out in regards to Thomas Lux who is speaking February 1st at 7:30 in the Coulter Auditorium. The homework (Fiction Invention) was discussed and individuals were questioned about the progress. Dr Adams then proceeded to discuss several terms and ideas. First, was about why the characters change and why some are complex. Second, was two-dimensional characters and what that meant. Third, was the difference between drama and melodrama. Last we looked at tension and setting. The homework for February 6th is to look
at page 191 in Three Genres and develop scenes for our short stories.
For February 13th we are to “flesh out” our characters and provide a list.
Dr. Adams also said a rough draft would be due in a few weeks. Also, do
the reading assigned on the syllabus (233-253 3G;107-112 COC).
Week 5 Prepared by Sheena Donnelly Tuesday February 6, 2001 In absentia: Austin Freeman, Rebecca Reeves Homework for Thursday February 8, 2001: Drill posted on the web page for Chapter 7 in The Craft of Clarity. Dr. Adams discussed characterization, dialogue, and red flags. At the end of class she checked our homework from over the weekend. Notes from class:
o Verbal tick o Personal language o Obsessive ness o Cigarette smoking o Nervous habits- chewing shirt sleeves o Ways of dress- all in black, not their age, bowties o Ways of walking- slow, strutting, limping o Eating habits- breaking food into little pieces o Talking habits- talking low or close, telling long boring stories o Bad breath o Too much cologne, annoying lip gloss smells o Narcissism o Allergies
o Attacked by a dog o Abuse- psychological, physical, sexual o Loss of a loved one o Getting arrested or witnessing a crime o Being picked on at school o Eating disorders
o Actions o Narrator’s description
o Use dialogue sparingly, for three reasons:
§ To slow down moments of suspense § Use at climactic scenes
§ Upon – replaced by on
§ I feel- replace with ‘I know’ or ‘I believe’
§ She is enjoying
Prepared by Tiffany Fair February 13, 2001 Class absences:Landingham, Freeman, Johnston Press Release:Dr. Adams handed a sheet that had the five American poets that we are supposed to do for the Press Release.She also showed the class the steps on doing a Press Release.Her instructions consisted of the following steps: 1.Decide on permanent information which should go at the top of the page Example: Five American Poets Admission Free 2.Do what you can to show importance of event. Example: Promote awareness of poetry; increase awareness in classroom, share ideas about poetry in classroom. 3.Talk about each person 4.Attach in file if you have attachments 5.When you send a Press Release make sure Public Information thinks this is an exciting event.They have a choose parts that are good. 6.Press Kit: this is to hold all your information. 7.Set format:Send a week before event. 8.Put in all caps: FOR IMMEDIATE ON OR ABOUT MARCH 25 9.Contact:Put your name, and the rest you can use Dr. Adams. Director, Visiting, Writer Series 828-227-3430 phone 828-227-7266 fax e-mail http://wcu.edu/as/english/vws/writerindex.html 10.Skip one space 11.http://www.ehow.com/eHow/eHow/0,1053,8793,00.html
for Guidelines for Press Release Homework:Bring in rough draft of short story for Thursday 15, 2001 Submitted by Austin A. Freeman February 15, 2001 In abstentia: Bill Ackerman, Rich Brewer, Jennifer Caruso, Chad Messer, Rebecca Reeves, Ryan Sclovtzoff, Kathy Wilson Dr. Adams did not review any material from previous classes. We split ourselves into groups of 4, with the exception of one 5 person group, and received from Dr. Adams peer review sheets. She explained that there would be three readers for each person’s story. We then read and reviewed the different stories in our group. Dr. Adams then informed us at the end of class
that on Tuesday our Press Release was due and on Thursday our final draft
of our short story.
Week 7
Week 8 Submitted by Chad Landingham Tuesday February 27th, 2001 Homework for Thursday March 1st, 2001: Read Pages 71-85 in The Craft of Clarity, work on editing press release. Dr. Adams took role and introduced Dr. Mimi Fenton, who sat in and observed class. Dr. Adams then collected hard copies of the manuscripts of the short story. The final portfolio, due at the end of the semester was discussed. Dr. Adams said to make sure to keep and date all returned materials for the portfolio. Example portfolios turned in by past students were shared to give an idea of what is expected. The class then edited the Chapter 4 action verbs assignment that had been graded and returned. The remainder of the class period was used to revise press releases, which when finished, should be placed in the directory Classes\ENGL303.02\Drop\New Folder\. Examples of key problems with press releases were provided at http://www3.wcu.edu/~madams/303pr_1.html with hyper links to a description of how to fix each problem.
Minutes Thursday 3/1/01 Chad Messer Absent: Johnston, Caruso, Brewer, Ackerman, and Pat Williams. Dr Adams supplies the class with a handout entitled “Common Proofreading Symbols”. Dr Adams briefly discussed “Politics and the English Language”, the text of which is available on the class web page. 1. Euphemism – “Finding language to defend the indefensible.” – Orwella. list of euphemisms for death2. The use of euphemism in politics was discussed.
1. Appearing to be honest by diverting attentionDr Adams gave examples of how to be honest without using euphemism.a. the myth of 110%2. Discussion of political euphemism Dr. Adams spoke on emotion and embellishments and why not to use them in real communication, especially underlining, italicizing, caps, and exclamation points. She also talked about the
On Tuesday we will discuss the midterm exam
that will be given on Thursday.
Prepared by Marcus Rostlund Tuesday March 6, 2001 In absentia: Ackerman, Brewer, and Messer. Dr. Adams discussed the difference between Copyediting and Proofreading: Copyediting: Usually done to the first copy of the paper, it is double-spaced, leaving room for editing marks. A copy editor should also suggest alternate ways to write incorrect statements. Proofreading: One of the last stages of writing.
It is single spaced to save room and to estimate size of final copy.
It is not going to receive as many proof marks as rough draft. To
proofread
Two handouts very given: One was on style, sentence-level, editing, and editing marks, and the other was a study guide for the test. The midterm will be a take home exam and should be turned in to Dr. Adams before 5 o’clock on Friday March 9th. Dr. Adams went over the test handout.
The right answers to the sample questions
are as follows:
Part II. Editing 40%: The correct version should read: What is the difference between silicon, silicone, and silica? This article will tell you. Silicon is Earth’s most abundant element. Silicon can act as an electrical semiconductor, which makes it indispensable. Silica, which takes their name from the Latin silex or “hard flint,” are polymers--compounds formed of semi-repeating molecules—and industry uses polymers for a range of purposes. Because silicon dries and dehumidifies so well, we often pack delicate instruments in it. Electronic editing will be mentioned on Tuesday
March 20, after spring break.
Week 10 Minutes for English 303.02 Prepared by Ryan Solovtzoff March 22, 2001 In Absentia: Ackerman, Landingham Survey responses were passed out for the Alumni Profiles. The class was asked to prepare a 250 or more word profile if possible. An example can be seen on p. 268 of How to
Write It. Dr. Adams discussed the importance of using a good lead,
including descriptive leads and question leads. Keeping the lead
short is also good. She showed how to access “14 leads based on the
same press release” from the web page, illustrating many approaches to
the same story.
Prepared by Patrick Williams March 29, 2001 Class absences: Dr. Adams most likely took attendance. Homework from previous class: We had been asked to have our profiles finished. However, this deadline was pushed back to Tuesday. 2 Types of letters covered: Dr. Adams started her lecture by mentioning that we were going to cover both request letters and bad new letters. 1. Before we could talk about the types of
letters she explained that knowing the audience that your addressing, what
your relationship to them is, and how much resistance do you expect is
important.
Persuasion letters: The first area of letter writing concerned the format involved when writing a persuasion letter. Dr. Adams listed four key elements to this type of letter and in the order in which they should appear, which had been nicknamed “AIDA”. 1. Attention: generating interest in
your message/ to imply that your request should be granted/ address a common
problem/ ask a question/ use praise
Bad news letters: Dr. Adams continued with typical things that one might see in a rejection letter. 1. Buffer statement: something geared
at making one initially feel better about rejection. Example:
thank you for applying
What you don’t write in a bad news letter
Class exercise: We were asked to write a persuasion letter. When finished with the letter we exchanged them with other students and wrote rejection letters to their requests. Homework: Dr. Adams handed back our
short stories and reminded us to bring our letters and short stories in
on Tuesday.
Prepared by Kathy Wilson April 3, 2001 In absentia: Ackerman, Brewer We were asked to bring in our profiles on disk to put in a web page form. Dr. Adams gave the procedures for making a word document into a Web Page. 1. Open profile in MS Word, then minimize.
After this we saved it to the share file, under English alumni profile, and took turns checking each other’s profile for expletives and “be” verbs. After it was agreed that the profiles were done we saved them to the Drop folder. Homework: Thursday bring Three Genres
and corrected drafts of your persuasion and rejection letters. You can
go to the links on the English 303 home page to help make corrections to
your short story, because you will need it again at the end of the semester.
Prepared by Gray Wilson April 5th, 2001 Class Absences - Attendance was not taken Homework from previous class - No HW was assigned from the previous class. Proofread Letters - Students passed around
persuasive letters and bad-news
Homework- Read "Hello Out There", "Coulda,
Woulda, Shoulda", and "Abe
Minutes for English 303 Submitted by Gretchen Johnston April 10, 2001 Started class talking about our (two previously written) business letters:
Dr. Adams went over the format (block format) that we are supposed to use. This format is the most common business letter format: From top of page, go down 3 spaces. In left justified format, Address
Go down another 3 spaces Name of person you are writing
Skip one space and add a subject line: Re: #12234 (if you have one). If you don’t have a subject line, then add the greeting at this time. If you have the title of the person (Mr., Dr., Prof., Ms.), then use it. If you are unsure of the title (for example--unclear gender), omit or search until you are sure. Don't use "to whom it may concern" if you can possibly avoid it. Skip one more space, after the greeting, and start the body portion of the letter. Keep the body left justified. DO NOT INDENT. All paragraphs should remain left justified throughout the body. At close, leave on space between last paragraph and the closing line (i.e. sincerely). After sincerely, go down four spaces (so a signature will fit), and end with Your Name
If your letter exceeds one page, you must use a header that shows a page number. You can get this by clicking on View, choosing Header&Footer, and in a right justified format, type in your name and page number. If you have included another piece of information with your letter, you must type (at the bottom of the page) either:
After going over letter format, the class discussion turned to focus on the plays (we were supposed to read) in three genres. This discussion led to a format to share our own ideas about good play material. You can find this material in:
Taken By Sarah Holmes April 19, 2001 Class Absences: Those who were absent today are lucky because Dr. Adams did not take attendance. Homework: Dr. Adams returned profiles, if you have not turned one in yet she would like it by next Tuesday. She would also like to have the Good News and Bad News letters by Tuesday. Profiles: Have consisten-tense when writing
profiles.
Today 04/19/01: Drafed plays. Remember, everytime
a new character enters or exits, make a new scene. Make a list of scenes
and begin writing.
Homework for next class: Dr. Adams requests
that we have rough drafts for peer review.
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